I'm just going to leave this hete

[Inxheneu Crova]

My shaky attempt at a t shirt design. done on the run. the secret is searching for all the words in.the dictionary with an exclamation point...

Can someone with taste and talent take a look and see if the idea is salvageable?
You should see my "Talossan provinces metro map" concept. Except drawing it is totally beyond me, but ideas are free

[Marti-Pair Furxheir S.H.]

Can you tell me about your province metro map?

[Inxheneu Crova]

Something like this. The hypothetical lines would pass through the capital of each province, with a "ferry" to Cezembre.

Its not the most oeiginal idea, but it might be a cool poster in the hands of someone competent.