Iac Marscheir
Citizen of Talossa
yak marsh air
Posts: 782
Talossan Since: 12-3-2016
Baron Since: Qet Miestra tent zirada.
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Post by Iac Marscheir on Nov 3, 2017 23:50:13 GMT -6
WHEREAS the Cézembrean provincial assembly thinks it can affect our laws using their laws, and
WHEREAS they think they can declare themselves the best province based on that,
THEREFORE be it enacted that, within Title A, Section 5 of the Comprehensive Body of Law Act, a new clause is created entitled Clause 1 (A.5.1) reading:
Quaxhitéu q'estadra sa
Iac Marscheir
EDITED. I'm going to leave this up for discussion for a little while longer. THE CURRENT VOTE IS HEREBY CANCELLED
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Post by Cresti Nouacastra-Läxhirescu on Nov 4, 2017 15:42:32 GMT -6
The “Noi Sint els Ceampiuns Act” has officially been put to vote. The deadline, by law, is two weeks, or until all members have voted, whichever comes first.
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Post by Cresti Nouacastra-Läxhirescu on Nov 4, 2017 15:42:58 GMT -6
1. PËR
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Iac Marscheir
Citizen of Talossa
yak marsh air
Posts: 782
Talossan Since: 12-3-2016
Baron Since: Qet Miestra tent zirada.
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Post by Iac Marscheir on Nov 4, 2017 15:44:42 GMT -6
PER
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Ian Plätschisch
Senator for Maritiimi-Maxhestic
Posts: 4,001
Talossan Since: 3-21-2015
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Post by Ian Plätschisch on Nov 4, 2017 18:01:03 GMT -6
If there had been any time for comment before this bill was almost immediately put up for a vote, I would have suggested that it be classified as A.5.1 instead of A.7, since I think it is bad practice to stick a new section at the end of a Title when there already exists a section that deals with the issue at hand.
Given that, I vote a sad CONTRA.
I have apparently become a crotchety old-timer now. Back when I was a new citizen I would draft bills like this and then immediately put them up for a vote all the time. I love the enthusiasm, but learning the "finer points" of legislating takes a while.
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Iac Marscheir
Citizen of Talossa
yak marsh air
Posts: 782
Talossan Since: 12-3-2016
Baron Since: Qet Miestra tent zirada.
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Post by Iac Marscheir on Nov 4, 2017 19:28:01 GMT -6
Jeez, well, I didn’t realize that the structure was title-section. If I were to change the designation, would that earn your vote?
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Ian Plätschisch
Senator for Maritiimi-Maxhestic
Posts: 4,001
Talossan Since: 3-21-2015
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Post by Ian Plätschisch on Nov 4, 2017 19:31:09 GMT -6
Jeez, well, I didn’t realize that the structure was title-section. I structured it basically the same way as el Lexhatx. Yes, although you'd have to restart the voting because the bill would be different.
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Post by Alèx Soleighlfred on Nov 13, 2017 6:00:21 GMT -6
On the one hand, there's a typo in this law proposal. On the other hand, this must be the best typo in Talossa, right? ;)
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Iac Marscheir
Citizen of Talossa
yak marsh air
Posts: 782
Talossan Since: 12-3-2016
Baron Since: Qet Miestra tent zirada.
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Post by Iac Marscheir on Nov 13, 2017 7:37:52 GMT -6
I turned off autocorrect ages ago.
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Ian Plätschisch
Senator for Maritiimi-Maxhestic
Posts: 4,001
Talossan Since: 3-21-2015
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Post by Ian Plätschisch on Jan 13, 2018 13:22:33 GMT -6
Iac Marscheir, are you going to modify this bill and then put it back up to a vote?
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