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Post by Sir Alexandreu Davinescu on Nov 26, 2018 18:36:42 GMT -6
Continuing the discussion of unresolved issues. These were addressed to V, but I guess now they're for the Seneschal?
1. It seems like Organic protections would attach to something we call a trial conducted by a defined body sitting in judgment and resulting in something we call a conviction. Presumably that is not intended, so we should fix this.
2. You want to create a court with three seats, but there are four justices. Nothing in the bill removes any justices, as far as I can see. What is the plan?
3. You want five judges total, with three on the CpI and two district judges. We don't have five people to be judges. What is the plan?
4. The Ziu regularly re-electing members of another branch of government seems like a problem in terms of balance of powers.
5. The Ziu setting rules for lower courts also seems like it's a problem in terms of balance of powers. A simple majority could impose a rule that gives them power to advance or slow cases, for example. It wouldn't require much ingenuity. That seems like a big problem.
6. Did you return the name of the CpI back to the current Talossan one?
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Post by Sir Alexandreu Davinescu on Nov 28, 2018 19:01:57 GMT -6
It's been literally weeks since the sponsor of the relevant language replied, and none of these problems have been fixed, and now the same problematic language is a part of the proposed FDT/MRPT constitution.
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Miestrâ Schivâ, UrN
Seneschal
the new Jim Hacker
Posts: 6,635
Talossan Since: 6-25-2004
Dame Since: 9-8-2012
Motto: Expulseascâ, reveneascâ
Baron Since: Feudal titles are for gimps
Duke Since: Feudal titles are for gimps
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Post by Miestrâ Schivâ, UrN on Nov 28, 2018 21:12:51 GMT -6
It's been literally weeks since the sponsor of the relevant language replied, and none of these problems have been fixed, and now the same problematic language is a part of the proposed FDT/MRPT constitution. The Distáin is snowed under with extra-Talossan work right now. Also, your tendency to troll him no doubt reduces his incentive to take your comments seriously.
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Post by Sir Alexandreu Davinescu on Nov 28, 2018 21:26:08 GMT -6
And yet the problems persist, no matter V's particular reactions to reasoned discussion. Who has the authority to speak about them, fix them, replace them? It's bad enough to try to remake the whole judiciary in two or three months, but to also do it when no one is going to actually work on it? The MRPT/FDT constitution already includes this mess, so it's not like I can just ignore it!
If you guys want this, would you please help fix it?
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Post by Sir Alexandreu Davinescu on Dec 3, 2018 18:34:17 GMT -6
More than a month now and still no answer to these problems, no proposed solutions, and not even any people willing to defend this.
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Miestrâ Schivâ, UrN
Seneschal
the new Jim Hacker
Posts: 6,635
Talossan Since: 6-25-2004
Dame Since: 9-8-2012
Motto: Expulseascâ, reveneascâ
Baron Since: Feudal titles are for gimps
Duke Since: Feudal titles are for gimps
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Post by Miestrâ Schivâ, UrN on Dec 3, 2018 20:42:01 GMT -6
If you wanted to persuade people you weren't acting in bad faith, you could attempt to propose your own solutions rather than grandstanding and trying to make political capital. That's exactly what this Pseudo-Hopper process is all about - allowing all MZs (and the King) to offer constructive alternatives, rather than just yelling and political point-scoring and attempting to frustrate and infuriate the Government.
If. I'm convinced you just want to wreck the whole process; but I could be wrong.
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Post by Sir Alexandreu Davinescu on Dec 3, 2018 21:17:26 GMT -6
Deal!
I propose the following as alternative text for the judiciary.
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Miestrâ Schivâ, UrN
Seneschal
the new Jim Hacker
Posts: 6,635
Talossan Since: 6-25-2004
Dame Since: 9-8-2012
Motto: Expulseascâ, reveneascâ
Baron Since: Feudal titles are for gimps
Duke Since: Feudal titles are for gimps
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Post by Miestrâ Schivâ, UrN on Dec 3, 2018 21:26:47 GMT -6
For those playing along at home, that is of course Article XVI of the current OrgLaw, copied and pasted.
But, ha ha, let's play along for a moment. Do you believe this would fit in with the rest of the Current Draft OrgLaw? Because if you don't, then you're just acting in obstructionist bad faith again. If you do, however, then, I'm keen for a debate.
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Post by Sir Alexandreu Davinescu on Dec 3, 2018 21:43:09 GMT -6
For those playing along at home, I made key changes to improve the judiciary But yes, I think the current system would fit basically in with the rest of the mess. We'd probably need to tinker on the edges a bit to make it work, of course. Once you read the FDT/MRPT constitution, you'll note provisions related to an institution in other sections, and so a lot of those would need to be moved. There's a lot of overall rewriting that needs to happen, anyway, of course. You have all sorts of weird things, such as a provision citing another provision for a definition of age of majority, only to find no age of majority explicitly defined in that different chapter. Why are the requirements for voting a full five chapters away from the point of necessity at which they'd be used? Your guess is as good as mine!
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Post by Sir Alexandreu Davinescu on Dec 3, 2018 21:47:54 GMT -6
I mean, what is the whole point of Chapter 1, Article 2? Is it a table of contents for the document that includes definitions, but is set away from the actual institutions for which it is defining things? What is the point of that beyond to really be confusing!? Is it just to say the branches of government in a super-fancy way? Because that could be done better and smarter in one sentence elsewhere.
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Miestrâ Schivâ, UrN
Seneschal
the new Jim Hacker
Posts: 6,635
Talossan Since: 6-25-2004
Dame Since: 9-8-2012
Motto: Expulseascâ, reveneascâ
Baron Since: Feudal titles are for gimps
Duke Since: Feudal titles are for gimps
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Post by Miestrâ Schivâ, UrN on Dec 3, 2018 22:14:38 GMT -6
All political trolling aside, you make several points which may possibly be good.
The fact of the matter is that the Distáin has been out of regular communication with the Cabinet for a while. We are honestly not sure why - he had a family crisis recently, so it may be related to that. I have deferred to him because he's written this whole thing himself through 5 drafts, trying to make it a coherent whole. I continue to defer to him, but I honestly hope he'll be back soon. Because there are certain parts of this document that I honestly can't tell why they're better than the existing version - but I trust his judgement, as he's a lawyer and I'm not. There has been too much bad law in Talossa for too long because it's written by people pretending to be lawyers, rather than actual lawyers.
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Post by Sir Alexandreu Davinescu on Dec 3, 2018 22:23:51 GMT -6
If no one can understand and defend and improve this thing but him, then how can it possibly be useful? The law should be as accessible to ordinary people as possible, and written in the plainest and easiest language that is possible without being ambiguous. That's why we have el Lexhatx. Compare the OrgLaw with this mess on voting, the topic I just noticed.
OrgLaw: ...universal popular vote by all adult citizens (age 14 and over).
Mess: No citizens, having achieved the age of majority as set forth in Chapter VII, article I, section 1 of this Organic law, shall be disenfranchised through the use of taxes or tests or other undue burdens ---> Children born after 1 January 1989/X, one (or both) of whose biological or adoptive parents is a Talossan citizen at the time of the birth, are native-born Talossan citizens ("Dandelions") and shall automatically have full voting rights when they register themselves with the appropriate authority on or after their 14th birthday.
Notice how much more confusing the second one is, how much harder to understand, and how it requires checking two places in the document and worrying you missed a third? Notice how it actually doesn't do a very good job since: - it doesn't spell out the age of majority - it defines a negative right (no one shall take away your vote) rather than a positive one (you have the right to vote at 14)? - it has huge loopholes, like a "proper authority" to determine voting rights.
There's a ton of this stuff.
If V is the only one who can understand and change and defend this, that's a enormous flaw. You're smart and can read English well... you should be able to use your own judgment here and compare these two and know which is better!
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Post by Sir Alexandreu Davinescu on Dec 9, 2018 11:20:44 GMT -6
Today is the one-month anniversary of the last time anyone besides me meaningfully worked on the proposed replacement for the entire justice system. I'm throwing a party.
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Post by Viteu Marcianüs on Dec 12, 2018 17:01:38 GMT -6
I've made the changes in the original thread.
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Post by Viteu Marcianüs on Dec 12, 2018 17:05:59 GMT -6
Continuing the discussion of unresolved issues. These were addressed to V, but I guess now they're for the Seneschal? 1. It seems like Organic protections would attach to something we call a trial conducted by a defined body sitting in judgment and resulting in something we call a conviction. Presumably that is not intended, so we should fix this. 2. You want to create a court with three seats, but there are four justices. Nothing in the bill removes any justices, as far as I can see. What is the plan? 3. You want five judges total, with three on the CpI and two district judges. We don't have five people to be judges. What is the plan? 4. The Ziu regularly re-electing members of another branch of government seems like a problem in terms of balance of powers. 5. The Ziu setting rules for lower courts also seems like it's a problem in terms of balance of powers. A simple majority could impose a rule that gives them power to advance or slow cases, for example. It wouldn't require much ingenuity. That seems like a big problem. 6. Did you return the name of the CpI back to the current Talossan one? (1) What?!? (2) I really can't understand how you couldn't figure out that they would be removed upon removal of the very provision that authorizes them to hold that seat; but fine, your pedantry is answered. it's been fixed. (3) I want a three-justice UC. (4) The Ziu relecting members of another branch in generla is not a problem in terms of balance of powers, but re-confirmation at intervals is a problem? Looks like you're taking a note from PM May's book in thinking that democratic votes somehow undermines democracy. (5) Stop talking out of both sides of your mouth - you went up in arms about the removal of Ben-Ard when "no rules were set," and now that I'm answering that by allowing for rules, you're saying it's problematic. (6) Already fixed. Come up with new stuff before you expect me to engage you again.
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